Issues Paper Reflection

My paper, titled “Online Safety”, makes a clear argument about the crisis that the security online has been suffering during the last decade. The introduction is well supported with plenty of background and information to put the reader in context, while following the staces. This argument is important to a wide variety of readers because of its kairos, as it is a topic that most readers will find interesting because of Internet’s popularity. This makes the paper stronger and more interesting. The thesis is well presented, clear and easy to understand and it introduces what is going to be touched throughout the paper. The thesis creates interest in the reader, as everyone is interested in what measures to take in order to protect themselves from the online dangers.

The biggest counter argument is that of the government’s actions, which is well taken care of, as it is proved with supporting research that the government has done more than enough and the power to change this remains in the very same population of Internet users. Logos, Pathos and Ethos are all found throughout the paper when citing sources, giving examples of children and teenagers who have died due to Internet Safety issues and logic statements. The organization is really good, dividing the issue into its two main topics and every paragraph and sentence is in the right place to create a good flow as one reads the paper. There is definitely a voice that suggests that this paper was written by a person, and not any person, but one who is part of the public and is concerned about security. MLA format is obeyed and the grammar and punctuation is really good. Suggestions made by the author are not repetitions of argument other authors have done about this issue, making this paper unique because the suggestions are actually applicable by any reader of this paper. The conclusion touches the main topics, definitions and suggestions, finishing off with an interesting and touching phrase to leave the reader anxious to follow the suggestions and help.