Our incredibly awesome proposal's topic is online safety for kids and families. We chose it because we think it is a very relevant issue in today's society because of the increasing popularity of the Internet, giving it a good Kairos. We used many colors in our design to give the proposal a happy look and to promote happiness between families and how many bad situations can be avoided by just following our proposal's suggestions. We walked through each one of the staces, starting by the definition of the problem and ending with our suggestions. The phrases we put all over the proposal stand out to make a call for action. The best part of it is we can all do something about it and not wait for someone to actually care and start investing money or something! It is a proposal that everyone can apply on their lives and it will not only help their families but their friends' families. Many proposals focus on one person or institution that can take it or not, but we were more realistic and made it so everyone can apply it on their lives if they really care about their health.
We appeal to ethos, pathos and logos with strong arguments and the cohesion and flow of the sentences makes it really easy for anyone to read. There's no complex wording and it doesn't become too long or too boring to read. We also found some really good pictures to describe what the problem looks like sometimes, and these make an impact on the reader that calls for action and supports our proposal. The design is really entertaining, standing out to the reader because of all the colours and pictures. And the best part is, we got cool pictures of mixed words to make it look professional, like this one!
Certainly, nothing can be better than our proposal. We deserve an A!
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